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Kristi Francis Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I'm not sure how I can fit this in
Hi everyone!
I'm currently writing an essay about Scotland, which I'll post later, and I got a few question which I need to answer in the text. I've answered all of them, except one which I can't really fit in.
The question: "How is the culture like? Theater, music, etc.
The paragraph I'm trying to fit it in:
I'm currently writing an essay about Scotland, which I'll post later, and I got a few question which I need to answer in the text. I've answered all of them, except one which I can't really fit in.
The question: "How is the culture like? Theater, music, etc.
The paragraph I'm trying to fit it in:
Anyone got any ideas how I can fit it in? Note that I'm not asking you to do it for me, I'm just looking for ideas.
Scotland is one of the most popular tourist destinations in the world, it is known for exquisite and unique liquor as well as its breath-taking and empowering landscapes. Scotland has also a rich history filled with thrilling myths and stories, for example the well-known Loch ness monster receding in one of Scotland’s largest lakes, Loch Ness. Scotland is also well-known for being a home country to many famous people, for example the famous chef Gordon Ramsey, who is known for his somewhat aggressive style in several cooking competitions shown on TV. Scotland is also known as the country where Alexander Graham Bell, the inventor of the telephone.
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eg Scottish culture, including the theatre and music, is mediocre. You have a number of errors in your paragraph, including too many uses of 'also'. Clive
- eg Scottish culture, including the theatre and music, is mediocre.
- You have a number of errors in your paragraph, including too many uses of 'also'.
- Clive
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eg Scottish culture, including the theatre and music, is mediocre.
You have a number of errors in your paragraph, including too many uses of 'also'.
Clive
You have a number of errors in your paragraph, including too many uses of 'also'.
Clive
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Cliveeg Scottish culture, including the theatre and music, is mediocre.You have a number of errors in your paragraph, including too many uses of 'also'.CliveThanks, I'll take that in mind. I haven't read through it carefully yet, so that might explain my errors.
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