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Tuyetden Posted 14 years ago
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Topic: Some students prefer to study in the library, while others prefer to study at home. Which way of studying do you prefer and why?
For students, learning is the most important thing. Besides learning in classes, they have to study more, and some students choose to study in the library, while other prefer to study at home. In my opinion, I prefer to study in the library because of 3 reasons.
Firstly, library is a place that has many interesting books and documents. They are devided into many fields such as: science, social, novel, .... Therefore, you can get any information you need.There are also many other students here, so you can ask them what you don't understand. I think that you can improve your studying by learning others.
Secondly, I find that the library is a good enviroment to study. Because it's very quiet here. No one talks to each other. And if they talk, they are just exchanging their views about something in a quietly way, and they are always trying not to disturb other students in the library. In a such enviroment, you can focus on your studying completely. And the result here is your learning is better.
And finally, I think this reason is the most important thing. As you know, we are living in a modern social, so there are many technological devides affecting on your studying, for examples, televisions, computers, mobilephones....which only our home have. If we study at home, our studying will be neglected by a TV or a mobilephone. But if you study in the library, there isn't any TV, we aren't allowed to bring any phone also, so we can not watch a film while we are learning or chat with our friends by messaging or calling.
In conclusion,library is a ideal place to study. I think that, however, we should try our best and have a clear aware of study more to find the right purpose as well as motivations for our study. If not, our studying will never be better!
This is my essays. I know that there are many mistakes. Could you check it for me! Thanks in advance!
For students, learning is the most important thing. Besides learning in classes, they have to study more, and some students choose to study in the library, while other prefer to study at home. In my opinion, I prefer to study in the library because of 3 reasons.
Firstly, library is a place that has many interesting books and documents. They are devided into many fields such as: science, social, novel, .... Therefore, you can get any information you need.There are also many other students here, so you can ask them what you don't understand. I think that you can improve your studying by learning others.
Secondly, I find that the library is a good enviroment to study. Because it's very quiet here. No one talks to each other. And if they talk, they are just exchanging their views about something in a quietly way, and they are always trying not to disturb other students in the library. In a such enviroment, you can focus on your studying completely. And the result here is your learning is better.
And finally, I think this reason is the most important thing. As you know, we are living in a modern social, so there are many technological devides affecting on your studying, for examples, televisions, computers, mobilephones....which only our home have. If we study at home, our studying will be neglected by a TV or a mobilephone. But if you study in the library, there isn't any TV, we aren't allowed to bring any phone also, so we can not watch a film while we are learning or chat with our friends by messaging or calling.
In conclusion,library is a ideal place to study. I think that, however, we should try our best and have a clear aware of study more to find the right purpose as well as motivations for our study. If not, our studying will never be better!
This is my essays. I know that there are many mistakes. Could you check it for me! Thanks in advance!
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