I'm new to the writing of poetry in Eng :)

This is my first piece which is a translation of a Chinese works of mine:

To love a fish
And greet farewell to the green fields
Soaring free under the water
Like no others
Just that fish won’t sing
Corals make no perfume
And life is never perfect
A glance over the blue sky
Then life is never the same
Little footsteps of dragonflies
Tickling on the beating heart
As the heart floats
The mind flies
With this pain to cut away
Almost unbearable
For a dream to complete
And this love for the fish
Hasn’t died
But still
The heart says
To cut or not to cut
Away