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Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
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I'm Mother Earth

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Oh! I'm mother earth!
Big and round;
Can't you see this beautiful planet,
Shiny and blue.
But I feel sad and angry!
Human of this world,
Do not care about the environment!
They litter, they pollute, they destroy ....

Oh, how I suffer,
How I suffer!
The ozone layer is depleting,
And the sun is destroying me!

Oh, I feel sick; Oh, so sick!
But it's not too late for us!
There is still hope and reuse!

Save the world ... ... save me!
  

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