I'm looking for help with my thesis

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I'm looking for someone who can help me to write my diploma thesis or at least the first chapter (about 8 pages). The theme is "isolation and survival in <<Robinson Crusoe>> and <<The Lord of the Flies>>" . The first chapter is supposed to be about Crusoe's survival.

I'm studying English philology in Poland and I have no idea HOW TO START WRITING.

If there is anyone who can help me start writing my degree work please tell me. I'll be grateful!

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Sorry, we won't write this for you. But if you try to write something, and then show us, we will offer you some help with your English.

You need first to choose a thesis statement. This is a brief but interesting statement about your topic. Obviously, you first need to read the two works, become familiar with them, think about them, and decide what opinions you have about them. In your paper, you will then explain your thesis further and try to prove that it is true.

As your level of study gets higher, your thesis statement ment needs to be more original.

Clive

Iskierka90 · Answer

Thank you for the reply but there has been some misunderstanding. I don't want you to write this for me, I just want someone to help me with the very first sentences.

Of course I have read both works, I know what should I have in following 8 pages, I just don't know how to start. What should the first paragraph contain? That's the biggest problem for me.

The first chapter is supposed to be about Crusoe, but should I start with comparison these two novels or rather focus just on Crusoe?

I do not know how to shape a thesis statement but I know what about it must be. This sentence should be like this: "Positive and negative effects of survival" in the sense that for Robinson everything ended up well and, on the contrary, for the children very bad. Cause-and-effect relationship. And i need to formulate all this things in one sentence and I don't know how

Clive · Answer

Hi,

Thank you for the reply but there has been some misunderstanding. OK

I don't want you to write this for me, I just want someone to help me with the very first sentences.

Of course I have read both works, I know what should I have in following 8 pages, I just don't know how to start. What should the first paragraph contain? You should first introduce the overall topic and thesis. Then explain how and why you are organizing your writing into chapters.

The first chapter is supposed to be about Crusoe, but should I start with comparison these two novels or rather focus just on Crusoe? If it is supposed to be about Crusoe, write about Crusoe. But it's a poor idea to just 'write' about Crusoe'. You need to explain why you are writing this chapter about Crusoe.

I do not know how to shape a thesis statement but I know what about it must be. This sentence should be like this: "Positive and negative effects of survival" in the sense that for Robinson everything ended up well and, on the contrary, for the children very bad. Cause-and-effect relationship. And i need to formulate all this things in one sentence and I don't know how

Try and write something in one or two proper sentences, and I'll be happy to have a look at it.

Clive

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