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Nhatminh12369 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
I'm learning writting
I'm learning writing English. Can you help me to find mistake and fix mistake for me, please? Thank you. 
This is my writting:
"Each year, my university have organized a competition named Thach Thuc. In a match of Thach Thuc, it has three teams and each team has four person. I have join this competition twice. And the first time I join Thach Thuc was two years ago. My team ware pass the test with average score but we really want to win this competition. We had tried a lot. Each day before the match, we gone to school to practise. The match we played was very excitting but my team not win because the competior was very excellent."
This is my writting:
"Each year, my university have organized a competition named Thach Thuc. In a match of Thach Thuc, it has three teams and each team has four person. I have join this competition twice. And the first time I join Thach Thuc was two years ago. My team ware pass the test with average score but we really want to win this competition. We had tried a lot. Each day before the match, we gone to school to practise. The match we played was very excitting but my team not win because the competior was very excellent."
Top answer
Each year my university organises a competition named Thach Thuc (tense). In a match of Thach Thuc, there are three teams of four people each (hmm... it's a game not an object/thing).
- Each year my university organises a competition named Thach Thuc (tense).
- In a match of Thach Thuc, there are three teams of four people each (hmm...
- it's a game not an object/thing).
- The first time I participated was two years ago, my team passed the test with average score but we really want to win this time (the competition is the same, you are just trying it again).
- We practiced a lot at school every day before the event, yet we didn't win because the competition (here we are talking about the opponents) was better than us.
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Each year my university organises a competition named Thach Thuc (tense). In a match of Thach Thuc, there are three teams of four people each (hmm... it's a game not an object/thing). The first time I participated was two years ago, my team passed the test with average score but we really want to win this time (the competition is the same, you are just trying it again). We practiced a lot at schoo
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