I'm having trouble with a thesis and topic sentence can someone guide me? Thank you.

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Ancient Futures: LadakhSocieties vary by location in the world. In Ladakh, it may slightly vary from the region you're in. In a village in Ladakh there is beliefs, behaviors, ideas and culture difference with what we are accustomed to. The These factor's contribute to Ladakh's developing society. Ladakh's society is developing because of their relationship with each other, behavior with culture, and their belief in being real economists.While the Ladakhis' culture might make them seem primitive , they have an interdependent relationship with each other that allows them to progress.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

Before you can choose a thesis, you need to start by defining your overall topic more clearly.

Did your teacher just say 'write everything you can about Ladakh'?

What does the phrase 'ancient future' mean?

Clive

Cutie125 · Answer

CliveDid your teacher just say 'write everything you can about Ladakh'?What does the phrase 'ancient future' mean?

Hello, thank you for your help. My teacher asked:
Would you call Ladakh a developed society, an underdeveloped society, or a developing society? Is it primitive, backward, or advanced?
She told us to write 3-5 paragraphs answering this question-- with a thesis, 3 points to support our thesis, and evidence from the documentary to support our points.
The phrase 'ancient future' was the title of the documentary.

Clive · Answer

CliveDid your teacher just say 'write everything you can about Ladakh'?What does the phrase 'ancient future' mean?

Hello, thank you for your help. My teacher asked:
Would you call Ladakh a developed society, an underdeveloped society, or a developing society? Is it primitive, backward, or advanced? So, in one sentence, what is your brief answer to these questions?

Now think about the reasons that you gave me that answer. What are the main 3 reasons? Just tell me each reason in one sentence each.

She told us to write 3-5 paragraphs answering this question-- with a thesis, 3 points to support our thesis, and evidence from the documentary to support our points.
The phrase 'ancient future' was the title of the documentary.

Clive

Cutie125 · Answer

CliveSo, in one sentence, what is your brief answer to these questions?Now think about the reasons that you gave me that answer. What are the main 3 reasons? Just tell me each reason in one sentence each.

Ladakh is a developing backward society.

The Ladakhis have a dependent relationship with one another that allows them to progress as a society.
Their belief of being "real economists" not wasting anything but maximizing their resources.
Their system of agriculture that consists of human and animal power and handmade tools.

Cutie125 · Answer

this is what the essay looks so far:
Societies vary by location in the world. In Ladakh, it may slightly vary from the region you're in. In a village in Ladakh there is beliefs, behaviors, ideas and culture difference with what we are accustomed to. These factor's contribute to Ladakh's developing society. Ladakh's society is developing because of their relationship with each other, behavior in agriculture, and their belief of being real economists.
While the Ladakhis' culture might make them seem primitive, they have an dependent relationship with each other that allows them to progress. Each family belongs to a group of a household in which they help each other from birth, in marriage, and death. Everyone lives together, works together, eats together, and sleeps together. They are very cooperative and are able to ask neighbors or relatives from far away for help. They are certain in being able to rely on each other for help with only food being served to eat and offering help in return. This cooperation between one another contributes to a developing society by building strong communities, peace with each other and equal work for everyone. This is showing Ladakh's slow progression.

Clive · Answer

Hi,

Ladakh is a developing but still backward society. This can be your thesis.

Each of these 3 reasons can be a paragraph. For each, you should say clearly how it helps Ladakh to develop, but what still needs to be done to stop Ladakh being backward.
The Ladakhis have a dependent relationship with one another that allows them to progress as a society.
Their belief of being "real economists" not wasting anything but maximizing their resources.
Their system of agriculture that consists of human and animal power and handmade tools.

Good luck!
Clive

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