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Cutie125 Posted 14 years ago
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I'm having trouble with a thesis and topic sentence can someone guide me? Thank you.

Ancient Futures: Ladakh
Societies vary by location in the world. In Ladakh, it may slightly vary from the region you're in. In a village in Ladakh there is beliefs, behaviors, ideas and culture difference with what we are accustomed to. The These factor's contribute to Ladakh's developing society. Ladakh's society is developing because of their relationship with each other, behavior with culture, and their belief in being real economists.
While the Ladakhis' culture might make them seem primitive , they have an interdependent relationship with each other that allows them to progress.
  

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Hi, Before you can choose a thesis, you need to start by defining your overall topic more clearly. Did your teacher just say 'write everything you can about Ladakh'? What does the phrase 'ancient future' mean?

  • Hi, Before you can choose a thesis, you need to start by defining your overall topic more clearly.
  • Did your teacher just say 'write everything you can about Ladakh'?
  • What does the phrase 'ancient future' mean?
  • Clive
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Hi,

Before you can choose a thesis, you need to start by defining your overall topic more clearly.

Did your teacher just say 'write everything you can about Ladakh'?

What does the phrase 'ancient future' mean?

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CliveDid your teacher just say 'write everything you can about Ladakh'?What does the phrase 'ancient future' mean?
Hello, thank you for your help. My teacher asked:
Would you call Ladakh a developed society, an underdevelop
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CliveDid your teacher just say 'write everything you can about Ladakh'?What does the phrase 'ancient future' mean?
Hello, thank you for your help. My teacher asked:
Would you call Ladakh a developed society, an underdevelop
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CliveSo, in one sentence, what is your brief answer to these questions?Now think about the reasons that you gave me that answer. What are the main 3 reasons? Just tell me each reason in one sentence each.
Ladakh is a developing backward society.

The Ladakhis have a dependent relationship with one another that allows them to progress as a society.
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this is what the essay looks so far:
Societies vary by location in the world. In Ladakh, it may slightly vary from the region you're in. In a village in Ladakh there is beliefs, behaviors, ideas and culture difference with what we are accustomed to. These factor's contribute to Ladakh's developing society. Ladakh's society is developing because of their relationship with each othe
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Hi,

Ladakh is a developing but still backward society. This can be your thesis.

Each of these 3 reasons can be a paragraph. For each, you should say clearly how it helps Ladakh to develop, but what still needs to be done to stop Ladakh being ba

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