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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

I'm having so much trouble with correcting these sentences please help

Could you please help me correct these sentences. I'm having so much trouble with them; I have no clue whether they are right.

- When I'm tired my bags become more visible.

- Be smarter than that. You're better than her.

- What we, the company, are/is looking for doesn't correspond to your studies and field.

- How can you not be happy with your pay when I make so much less than you.

- For all the times I carried the bag, Carry it this time.

- I look nice wearing the dress/in this dress.

- She eats for 3 people.

- The car came 2 cm from your head/from hitting your head.

- He's late like usual/like always

- If you are not on the right floor it will drive you crazy trying to locate the person since your mini-map will show you as being right on
- The movie he's starring in has nothing to do with his normal repertoire/with the movies he usually plays in.
- I can feel your breath on/you breathing on my face as/while I sleep next to you.

Thank you
  

Top answer

- [OK] Be smarter than that. - How can you not be happy with your pay when I make so much less than you ? [Although the comparison is understandable, it is odd.

  • - [OK] Be smarter than that.
  • - How can you not be happy with your pay when I make so much less than you ?
  • [Although the comparison is understandable, it is odd.
  • My attempt: How can you not be happy with you pay?
  • - [I've carried/held this bag all the time.
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2 Answers
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Hi

As a non-native speaker, I suggest:
alc24When I'm tired my bags become more visible.- [OK]

Be smarter than that. You're better than her.- [Grammar is OK]

What we, the company, are looking for doesn't correspond (relate) to your studies and field.-

How can you not be happy with your pay when I make so much less tha
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Could someone please give me their opinion on these?

Thank you

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