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Alc24 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
I'm having a lot of trouble expressing these sentences naturally
Could you please help me write these sentences so they can sound natural please?
- The tray tipped over as when you took the plate off the tray, the weight was no longer evenly distributed across the tray, making it tip over.
- I had just enough slices of bread to lay around the contour of the bread basket for decoration.
- His love story resembles ours.
- The kitchen isn’t placed conveniently in relation to the living room/compared to the living room.
- He dropped a pot of honey and the honey stuck to the floor. (is stuck the right word?)
- I can’t give you his floor number. You need to call him and ask him.
- These pages go at the back/end of the report.
- This video was rated 89 percent and that video is only 2 percent down compared to the latter at 87 percent.
- The tray tipped over as when you took the plate off the tray, the weight was no longer evenly distributed across the tray, making it tip over.
- I had just enough slices of bread to lay around the contour of the bread basket for decoration.
- His love story resembles ours.
- The kitchen isn’t placed conveniently in relation to the living room/compared to the living room.
- He dropped a pot of honey and the honey stuck to the floor. (is stuck the right word?)
- I can’t give you his floor number. You need to call him and ask him.
- These pages go at the back/end of the report.
- This video was rated 89 percent and that video is only 2 percent down compared to the latter at 87 percent.
Top answer
As/when are both ok, but you need a second sentence, beginning with "the weight". conveniently to the living room I see no need for 'stuck'. That would be assumed.
- As/when are both ok, but you need a second sentence, beginning with "the weight".
- conveniently to the living room I see no need for 'stuck'.
- That would be assumed.
- " You need to call and ask him.
- (redundancy) end of the report video: what are you trying to say?
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As/when are both ok, but you need a second sentence, beginning with "the weight".
conveniently to the living room
I see no need for 'stuck'. That would be assumed. "He dropped the pot of honey on the floor."
You need to call and ask him. (redundancy)
end of the report
video: what are you trying to say?
when getting your blood taken
conveniently to the living room
I see no need for 'stuck'. That would be assumed. "He dropped the pot of honey on the floor."
You need to call and ask him. (redundancy)
end of the report
video: what are you trying to say?
when getting your blood taken
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