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An individual's sexuality is permanently wired into their brain since early childhood. This is a result of a combination of both the individual's genes and the environment in which they grew up in. Typically, by the age of 2 - 3 a child will recognize gender in his/her peers as well as his/herself. This moment in their lives will permanently define their sexuality - or to be more politically correct, their "gender identity." Beyond this point, there's no way to rewire the child's brain, and so, their sexual preference is set in stone for the rest of their lives. I've yet to come across a single instance in which a homosexual has ever "changed" their sexual preference by means of sexual orientation programs or prayer. Aside from the bible's condemnation of homosexuality, there are no apparent drawbacks in allowing homosexuals to live their lives as they intend to. Statistically speaking, the average homosexual is not only more educated, but also more creative, and successful than the average heterosexual.
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It can be tightened and made more immediate. Our sexuality is wired into our brain in early childhood. This is a result of our genes and our environment.
- It can be tightened and made more immediate.
- Our sexuality is wired into our brain in early childhood.
- This is a result of our genes and our environment.
- By the age of 2 or 3, we will recognize gender in our peers as well as ourselves .
- This moment in our lives will permanently define our gender identity .
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It can be tightened and made more immediate.
Our sexuality is wired into our brain in early childhood. This is a result of our genes and our environment.
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