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Due to the recent situation, the world has witnessed impressive growths in the economy of different countries among continents. Viet Nam as a member of the Asia union, has to come up with urgent strategies in order not to fall back in this thrilling race.

However, Viet Nam is now facing some challenges which stop the country from thriving. The first problem is the low labor productivity. only 8% of the labor force has a university education, which is insufficient to make the leap into the knowledge economy. Ethnic minorities, older workers, and pockets of youth in Vietnam are particularly vulnerable. While an economy that is more technology intensive has the potential to open up opportunities for better quality jobs, workers need to be equipped with the right skills mix to ride this wave. The second challenge poses a significant risk to Vietnam, and that is climate change. Temperature increases per decade in Vietnam since the 1960s is double that of the global average. Rising sea-levels expose a third of Vietnam’s population to the risk of flooding, growing to more than 80% in the Mekong and Red River Deltas. Changing salinity threatens 2/3 of Vietnam’s fish from aquaculture and puts the livelihood of 13.6 million rice farmers at risk. As Vietnam is an agricultural country, citizen's lives depend largely on weather conditions. The third is Vietnam’s aging population. Vietnam is about to experience the fastest pace of population aging in history. The share of the population that is of working age peaked this year and will now start to decline. The share of the population aged 65 or over was 6.5% in 2017, and that is expected to reach 21% by 2050. That means one in every five people will be elderly. This has many negative implications for Vietnam’s labor supply, long-term productivity growth, the pension and social assistance system.

New generations represent the future development of the country. Hence, we have to become a good citizen which means a person with enthusiasm, compliance, creativity and assiduity. With all the human rights that we are given, it is a great chance for us to showcase and utilize our talents and intellect because youth is that period in which revolutionary thoughts spring to mind and these thoughts shape the world we live in. Bill Gates, the founder of Microsoft Corporation, is a living example. After that, we can come up with brilliant ideas and make it happens. First thing is to help more people reach education by building more schools in remote areas, therefore, unemployment can be fixed and increase the workforce's quality. Moreover, the youth can create new business models where workers can get used to modern technology. The second thing should be done with the environment. Lots of environmental projects could be carried out to lessen the effects of climate change on human life and working conditions. Last but not least, encouraging older workers to remain longer in the labor force is often cited as the most viable solution to fiscal pressures and macroeconomic challenges related to population aging. To do that, younger generations should focus on improving public health care and inventing technology to slow down the aging procedure.

In conclusion, Youth are not only the leaders of tomorrow but also the partners today.