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Zorina Posted 15 years ago
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I’m an early riser
Could you please check grammar, vocabulary and punctuation errors in the text. Does it sound natural?
Well, I usually set my alarm clock at 6.30, but when it goes off I don’t get up immediately. I push a “snooze on” button without getting back to my consciousness. It goes off again every five minutes, but, to be honest, I can go on sleeping like that for more than an hour.
What makes me get up quickly is my cat. She likes the windowsill in my room, especially in the morning when it’s luminous with sunlight. So she wakes me up by jumping up to the door knob – she must have overseen how we touch the knob when opening the door. More exactly, she springs upon the door knob, catch it for a second with a scrape sound, then glide down the door and thud against the floor. Sometimes she makes such a loud crash that I believe she takes a running jump. Anyway, this sound usually forces me to get up.
Well, I usually set my alarm clock at 6.30, but when it goes off I don’t get up immediately. I push a “snooze on” button without getting back to my consciousness. It goes off again every five minutes, but, to be honest, I can go on sleeping like that for more than an hour.
What makes me get up quickly is my cat. She likes the windowsill in my room, especially in the morning when it’s luminous with sunlight. So she wakes me up by jumping up to the door knob – she must have overseen how we touch the knob when opening the door. More exactly, she springs upon the door knob, catch it for a second with a scrape sound, then glide down the door and thud against the floor. Sometimes she makes such a loud crash that I believe she takes a running jump. Anyway, this sound usually forces me to get up.
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Zorina Could you please check grammar, vocabulary and punctuation errors in the text. Does it sound natural? 30, but when it goes off I don’t get up immediately.
- Zorina Could you please check grammar, vocabulary and punctuation errors in the text.
- Does it sound natural?
- 30, but when it goes off I don’t get up immediately.
- I push a “snooze on” button without getting back to my consciousness.
- What makes me get up quickly is my cat.
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ZorinaCould you please check grammar, vocabulary and punctuation errors in the text. Does it sound natural? Well, I usually set my alarm clock at 6.30, but when it goes off I don’t get up immediately. I push a “snooze on” button without getting back to my consciousness. It goes off again every five minutes, but, to be honest, I can go on sleeping like that for more than
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