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The bar chart indicates the percentage of people doing exercise at Australian in 2010 by age groups.

Overall, the female do exercise much more frequently than the male from 25s to 64s, whereas this is opposite at 15 to 24 group. The figures for 65s over was shown that regular physical activity of both sexes was the same.

At 15 to24 group, the percentage of male doing exercise was the highest in all of groups – at around 52,8% and the rate of female was lower of about 47,7%. Meanwhile, at 35 to 44 group was seen the lowest point in the number of man who usually activity exactly 38.5%. The rate of women also reached to the peak at near 52.5%.

The number of male regularly activiting declined gradually to 39.5% from 15s to 44s before increasing steadily to 46,7% in 65 groups age. By contrast, the number of women went up and reached to peak 53.5% at 45to 54 group, reducing to 53 % at next group. In the end of the chart, this decreased remarkably about nearly 10 percent at 65s over group.