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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
i'll sleep when I feel sleepy, water is coming very slowly
I'm doing a very important project and I will sleep only when I feel sleepy, so you don't wait for me. You go and sleep. I'll come soon to sleep.
Water from the tap is coming very slowly, so it takes a lot of time to full a bucket of water.
Please correct my sentences.
Water from the tap is coming very slowly, so it takes a lot of time to full a bucket of water.
Please correct my sentences.
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Hi Gary, The repetition of a word over and over is not natural. There is nothing grammatically wrong with what you have written. I'm going to rewrite it to make it sound a bit more natural.
- Hi Gary, The repetition of a word over and over is not natural.
- There is nothing grammatically wrong with what you have written.
- I'm going to rewrite it to make it sound a bit more natural.
- Don't use the word "you" when using the imperative.
- " I'm working on a very important project and I will go to bed only when I feel very sleepy, so don't wait for me.
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Hi Gary,
The repetition of a word over and over is not natural. There is nothing grammatically wrong with what you have written. I'm going to rewrite it to make it sound a bit more natural. Don't use the word "you" when using the imperative. "Don't wait for me," not "You don't wait for me."
I'm working on a very important project and I will go to bed only when I fee
The repetition of a word over and over is not natural. There is nothing grammatically wrong with what you have written. I'm going to rewrite it to make it sound a bit more natural. Don't use the word "you" when using the imperative. "Don't wait for me," not "You don't wait for me."
I'm working on a very important project and I will go to bed only when I fee
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