If you have time, please give me your opinion about my writing ielts task 1.

Question

The pie charts give information about the proportion of different taxes as well as using the money of government in the UK last year.

It is clear that the income tax was the highest of all the UK tax revenue. The money government spent on the pensions received the biggest proportion in the entire of use.

Last year, the proportion of the income tax in the UK was 28%. The figures for the national insurance and the value added tax were lower, at 21% and 17% respectively. The other taxes registered about 11%. The percentage of the council tax, business rates and the fue duty were same, at 5%.

The government spent one-fifth on the pensions. 18%, 17% and 14% was for the health care, welfare and the education respectively. Both the other spending and the defence were 3%. Similarly, the money for thetransport and the general government were 3% for each. The figure for the interest payments on debt was 6%.

Tile papaya 630 · Accepted Answer

The pie charts give information about the proportion of different taxes as well as using the money of government in the UK last year.

It is clear that the income tax was the highest of all the UK tax revenue. The money government spent on the pensions received the biggest proportion in the entire of use.

Last year, the proportion of the income tax in the UK was 28%. The figures for the national insurance and the value added tax were lower, at 21% and 17% respectively. The other taxes registered about 11%. The percentage of the council tax, business rates and the fue duty were same, at 5%.

The government spent one-fifth on the pensions. 18%, 17% and 14% was for the health care, welfare and the education respectively. Both the other spending and the defence were 3%. Similarly, the money for thetransport and the general government were 3% for each. The figure for the interest payments on debt was 6%.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Where are the pie charts?

Tile papaya 630 · Answer

WRITE DESCRIPTION HERE

AlpheccaStars · Answer

The pie charts give information about the proportion of different taxes (unnatural, unclear) as well as using the money of government (unnatural, unclear) in the UK last year. (Just write the labels on the pie charts).

~~It is clear that~~ (That is your

~~It is clear that~~ (That is your opinion and these words are not necessary to describe the chart. Avoid writing any opinions or conclusions in Task 1. ) the income tax was the highest of all the UK tax revenue. The money government spent on ~~the~~ pensions received the biggest proportion in the entire of use.(wrong usage)

Last year, (Unnecessary. You have already said that the data is from the previous year.) the proportion of the income tax (Which part of the income tax? From individuals or businesses?) in the UK was 28%. The figures (Refers to "proportion of the income tax?") for the national insurance (Is that part of the income tax?) and the value added tax were lower, at 21% and 17% respectively. The other taxes registered about 11%. The percentage of the council tax, business rates and the fue duty were same, at 5%.

The government spent one-fifth (missing words) on ~~the~~ pensions. 18%, 17% and 14% was for the health care, welfare and the education respectively. Both the other spending and the defence were 3%. Similarly, the money for thetransport and the general government were 3% for each. The figure for the interest payments on debt was 6%.

Model essay for your learning:

The two pie charts show a breakdown of the government revenue and government spending in the UK for the previous year. The income chart was divided into seven major specified categories plus "other sources" and the spending chart into nine categories plus "other spending."

In the first pie chart, sources of income, seventy-five percent came from the top four categories in this order: Income tax (28%), National insurance (21%) Value added tax (17%) and Corporation tax (8%). All the other named categories, Fuel Duty, Business rates, Council tax were about equal contributors, at about 5% each. The revenue from all other sources amounted to 11%.

In the second pie chart, government spending, the top four categories accounted for more than two-thirds of the total. These were, in order, Pensions (20%), Health care (18%), Welfare (17%) and Education (14%). The government's budget for Social Services (Health Care, Welfare, and Education) was about half of the total spending. Amounts allocated to the remaining five named categories were 7% or less each, with Defence being highest at 7%, followed by Interest payments (6%), Protection (5%), Transport and General government (3% each). The miscellaneous expenditures accounted for the rest of the total (7%).

If you have time, please give me your opinion about my writing ielts task 1.

Top answer

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

Related Questions