If you have a lot of money, what would you do? This is a writing test that my teacher give me. Please help me check it correctly. Thank you

Suppose i luckily had much money, i would do many things.

The first, i would spend little money on enjoying by myself. I would travel over all countries around the world even outside. I would take my families to visit new lands, especially in Europe. Moreover, i would go shopping, buy a nice house and some modern cars.

The second, i used to dream about abundance life in the future so i would use a sum of money to open a saving account and invest in real estate.

The third, if i had huge amount of money, i would do the charity to help community. I am also a poor so i think we should share with other people by donating money to non - profit organizations, temples, churches, orphanages,... I would build up factories in my town to provide jobs for many people in need.

Furthermore, i would open up schools, hospitals, and proper housing for all kids i find at the street begging. I will make sure that colleges and universities got enough resources to continute avanced research in difirent fields. I hope i could help student pay for their fee.

The last, i would start a youtube channel where i could share about the impact of global warming to promote heathier lifestyles

To sum up, beside spending money for ourselves, we should do so many meanful things whether we owned lots of money. We should consider carefully before we use because "Living is giving away, not only receiving ourselves." To Huu says.