If this Title Makes Sense - Discover A New Standard Of Luxury Marketing & Selling System.
I would like to know if the title below makes sense grammatically. This is the title of my booklet selling luxury real estate. I would really appreciate any professional suggestions. Thank you in advance.
"Discover A New Standard Of Luxury Marketing & Selling System".
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It doesn't read well. "A new standard of selling system" doesn't make sense. I would recast the entire title.
- It doesn't read well.
- "A new standard of selling system" doesn't make sense.
- I would recast the entire title.
- Discover a New Standard of Marketing and Selling Luxury A System with a New Standard of Marketing and Selling Luxury Discover A System with a New Standard of Marketing and Selling Luxury
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It doesn't read well. "A new standard of selling system" doesn't make sense. I would recast the entire title.
Discover a New Standard of Marketing and Selling Luxury
A System with a New Standard of Marketing and Selling Luxury
Discover A System with a New Standard of Marketing and Selling Luxury
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