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Nikitus Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

If Susan if she approaches Chad personally it will only make things worse due to the weak state of mind of Chad

In the sentence "If Susan if she approaches Chad personally it will only make things worse due to the weak state of mind of Chad", is the grammar correct?

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No, there are too many "if"s. Mind of Chad is better phrased as Chad's mind .

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  • No, there are too many "if"s.
  • Mind of Chad is better phrased as Chad's mind .
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No, there are too many "if"s.
Mind of Chad is better phrased as Chad's mind.
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