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BeginStudent Posted 18 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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Hi ,
I have take to write writing about opinion , I've chosen - school uniforms .
There has been a suggestion to wear school uniforms.This suggestion is controversial.Some students are in favor of it while others opposite it.
On the one hand,this proposal has various positive effects.First all the students dressed equal . The students have money will come with beautiful clothes when others will come with less beautiful clothes to school.Moreover,you don't need to search in morning which kind of clothes you will wear.
On the other hand,this proposal has also some negative effects.The school uniforms doesn't warm the body in the winter.Their fabric isn't enough thick to keep our body in regular warmth in the winter.
To conclude,I strongly believe that advantages outweigh the disadvantages . Therefore,I highly recommend adopting this suggestion.
This my writing , I want someone to fix my wrongs.
Thanks.
I have take to write writing about opinion , I've chosen - school uniforms .
There has been a suggestion to wear school uniforms.This suggestion is controversial.Some students are in favor of it while others opposite it.
On the one hand,this proposal has various positive effects.First all the students dressed equal . The students have money will come with beautiful clothes when others will come with less beautiful clothes to school.Moreover,you don't need to search in morning which kind of clothes you will wear.
On the other hand,this proposal has also some negative effects.The school uniforms doesn't warm the body in the winter.Their fabric isn't enough thick to keep our body in regular warmth in the winter.
To conclude,I strongly believe that advantages outweigh the disadvantages . Therefore,I highly recommend adopting this suggestion.
This my writing , I want someone to fix my wrongs.
Thanks.
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BeginStudent Hi , I have take to write writing about opinion , I've chosen - school uniforms . There has been a suggestion to wear school uniforms. Some students are in favor of it while the others opposite it.
- BeginStudent Hi , I have take to write writing about opinion , I've chosen - school uniforms .
- There has been a suggestion to wear school uniforms.
- Some students are in favor of it while the others opposite it.
- On the one hand that proposal has various positive effects.
- First of all , the students are dressed equal .
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BeginStudentHi ,
I have take to write writing about opinion , I've chosen - school uniforms .
There has been a suggestion to wear school uniforms. This suggestion is controversial.Some students are in favor of it while the others opposite it.
On the one hand that proposal has various positive effects. First of
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Thanks , I have question about this :
"Their fabric (quality) isn't enough thick to keepour body in regular warmth in the winter. Also sounds odd."
I can said grammaticaly this :"Also odd sounds"
because you said the adj after noun . if "sounds" is verb which word the "odd" describe ?
"Their fabric (quality) isn't enough thick to keep
I can said grammaticaly this :"Also odd sounds"
because you said the adj after noun . if "sounds" is verb which word the "odd" describe ?
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BeginStudentThanks , I have question about this :
"Their fabric (quality) isn't enough thick to keepourbody in regular warmth in the winter. Also sounds odd."
I can said grammaticaly this :"Also odd sounds"
because you said the adj after noun . if "sounds" is verb which word the "odd" describe ?
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Because "odd" is a short adjective in that case.
"It was strange that she did that way". Does "strange" sound bad for you?
I wonder if teachers could correct me in case I'm wrong
"It was strange that she did that way". Does "strange" sound bad for you?
I wonder if teachers could correct me in case I'm wrong
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What exactly didn't you understand? I'll try to make you clear about that. Return to the basics.
Adjective - is part of speech which shows character of person or thing (red pencil, angry man, silent engine). It has two forms - the short form and the full form. The short one indicates state of thing (person) in moment now. The seashore is wet because of a surf. "Wet" here
Adjective - is part of speech which shows character of person or thing (red pencil, angry man, silent engine). It has two forms - the short form and the full form. The short one indicates state of thing (person) in moment now. The seashore is wet because of a surf. "Wet" here
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