If I hear one more whiny word from your mouth I'm telling her what you did, do you understand?
1) Is the "hear one more * word from your mouth"-part natural or would it typically be phrased in another way?
2) Should there be a comma after "mouth"?
anonymous 1) Is the "hear one more * word from your mouth"-part natural or would it typically be phrased in another way? The phrasing is OK, but I'd use cranky, snarky, smug, or snippy instead of whiny . anonymous 2) Should there be a comma after "mouth"?
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anonymous1) Is the "hear one more * word from your mouth"-part natural or would it typically be phrased in another way?
The phrasing is OK, but I'd use cranky, snarky, smug, or snippy instead of whiny.
anonymous2) Should there be a comma after "mouth"?
Yes, there definitely should.
CJ