Hello,<br/><br/>1. The more an identity feels threatened, the more it tends to be inward looking. (Rewrite using 'if')<br/><br/>a. If an identity feels threatened, it tends to be inward looking.<br/><br/>Is (a) correct ?<br/>Could any one here correct it?<br/><br/>2. Her hobbies are exactly the same as the anonymous youth's.( Change it to negative)<br/><br/>b. Her hobbies are <b>not</b> exactly the same as the anonymous youth's.<br/><br/>Is (b) correct ?<br/><br/>Thanks.