Ietls essay

Success is the thing that all of us want to have in our life. However, only a few people can achieve one. What is the reason? "Success", a word is made of talent and also hard work. Some people believe that talent plays a key role while others have the perception that hard work is the pillar of success.
Talent is something that can not be created. It exists inside every person since they were born. To clarify, I will give an example. I have a friend who played piano when she was 3 years old. She had practiced that instrument for ten years. Her family expected a lot from her, they hoped she could be a pianist. Moreover, during secondary school, she only concentrated on piano, I remember she also simultaneously study at two schools, her middle school, and music academy. All of us thought that she would pursue it until the end, but she stopped learning when she was in grade 9. She realized she didn't have a passion for piano anymore. Since then, she has not touched any pano keys, she even forgot musical notes.
I have learned a lesson from hers, having talent is like that, but if you do not work hard, it won't lead to success. We always have something we are interested in, then we think we can't do that, that is so hard and we are not qualified to do it. However, believe me, if you practice day by day, success won't make you disappointed. Failure for the first time is a normal thing, don't lose your motivation. Let's meet some inspired people, make friends with productive ones, all of that can encourage you to be successful.
According to my, hard work is far more important than talent. No need to be good at a specific field, you just need to train yourself, spent time on it as well, you will achieve success.