0
Babyboo Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

IELTS_WRITING TASK 1 - The graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005

Click here: https://scontent-hkt1-1.xx.fbcdn.net/v/t1.15752-9/90087184_2617014735249235_7229117153935360_n.png?_nc_cat=106&_nc_sid=b96e70&_nc_ohc=aCFzTXkV0vQAX9swgZB&_nc_ht=scontent-hkt1-1.xx&oh=205d6cce8ad6910d9fdb83d82427a5c6&oe=5E95F5C3

The line graph illustrates the comparison of three different categories of crime in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.

Overall, the crime rates of car theft and house burglary increased markedly in the middle years of the period shown whilst there was a slight fluctuation in the figure for street robbery throughout the stage.

The car theft crime rating, which rose swiftly during the first 25 years, dropped back to 1 millions in the last years surveyed. Although the figure of car theft experienced a plunge, it kept the first place in 2005. Also, the figure of house burglary had an upward trend to reach a peak at 0.5 millions and then descended gradually to 0.36 millions. Unlike the crime rates of car theft and house burglary, the figure of street robbery made no difference at all. The number of street robbery crimes hovered around 0.05 millions over the whole period.

In conclusion, the rankings of three different crime groups have not changed as compared to the first years of the whole period. Car theft and house burglary were the main criminal groups in England and Wales while street robbery was the lowest.

  

Top answer

Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line. Put it with your answer in the message body. Subject: Please review my IELTS essay Message body: Topic: The graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005 Please give all the essay instructions here.

  • Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
  • Put it with your answer in the message body.
  • Subject: Please review my IELTS essay Message body: Topic: The graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005 Please give all the essay instructions here.
  • ) ---------------------
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

2 Answers
0

Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
Put it with your answer in the message body.

Subject: Please review my IELTS essay

Message body:
Topic: The graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005 Please give all the essay instructions here.

My essay:

(Your text here...)
-

0

Please read my advice for Task 1 essays:


The line graph illustrates (Wrong word. "Illustrate" means "make a picture." Use this verb for maps, flow charts, and other diagrams. Do not use it for data plots: bar charts, pie charts and graphs.) the comparison of compares th

Related Questions