IELTS_Task1 Can you please review my writing

The graph below shows the number of visitors to three museums between 2000 and 2005.

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The given bar chart demonstrates how many people have visited three museums named MET in New York, Edo-Tokyo, and National in China over a half-decade between 2000 and 2005. The numbers are given a million.

Overall, what stands out from the graph is that the number of visitors to the National Museum in China experienced steady growth while MET and Edo-Tokyo fluctuated over the period in question. Another interesting point is that the National Museum was the least popular museum of the three museums in 2000; however, in 2005 it attracted more visitors than the other museums.

Looking at the details, as regards Edo-Tokyo, the number of people visiting it remained stable at around 14 million in the first two years, and after that, it decreased dramatically from just under 14 to around 6 million in 2003. Although it increased in the last two years, it remained the less popular museum of the three. As for MET in New York, the number of visitors fell sharply in 2001, plunged to about 6 million and leveled off until 2002. Following this, it rose significantly from about 6 million to just over 14 million between 2002 and 2005.

On the other hand, the number of National museum visitors increased gradually in this half-decade from 6 million to approximately 16 million, this figure being the peak level of the number of visitors during the whole period.