IELTS wrting task 2

Topic: Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. Other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

My answer:

It is argured that it would be greater if you enjoy sports which need a group or a team instead of individual sports like tennis, swimming...In my opinion, people should thake part in both kinds of sports.

On the one hand, there are lots of reasons why some people think team sports have more benefits. Firtsly, participating sports that are played in team usually practice team-building. Secondly, member at the same group can help each other to improve skills. For example, when you play football, you would learn more knowledge about football and skills that you have never known from peers. That is nececcsary for you i the future if you work in a major company. Futhermore, football also help to connect people to be socialty and friendly.

On the other hand, it is beneficial to take part in solo sports. you will concentrate on practicinbg if there is no one beside you. Swimming is a example about advantages of playing sports individually. As you swim, you need to extremely focus on learning skills. You have to try your best because no encouragement is given for you by anybody. Thus, you would become more independent and get your goal quicker.

I belive that it would be better to take part in team sports and individual sports. You learn not only how to make teamwork but also concentration and independence. It is nice to become healthier and gain life skills from both sports.

Although there is a argurement about benifits of team sports and solo sports, I think playing both them is a superb method to be more healthier and better.