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The given drawing illustrates the process of collecting and producing reliable forecasts which is used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.

From the overview perspective, this process includes four main stages, beginning with the collectional method of weather information. This data is then analyzed, prepared for presentation, and finally broadcast to the public.

In the first stages of a given process, incoming weather information was provided by satellite, radar, and drifting buddies. After that, an analytical and forecasting step starts to predict and analyze satellite photos, radar screens, and synoptic charts that were collected in the previous stage.

Having been analyzed in this way, figures are delivered to the media responsible place, and this place is responsible for preparing and broadcasting information on air. In the final stages, all the predicted data is published on common broadcasts by many media outlets, like television newsreaders, on the radio, or as recorded announcements.