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The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summary the information by selecturing and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph demonstrate the changes of radio and television audiences after a day in 1992.

Overall we can see that the UK populations inthe age of 4 years old and more of television is relatively rose in the day.By contrast, radio listeners constanly falling off around noon time.
At 6am in the morning, television viewers reach a low point of approximately 0%, however it rose initially and reachef a peak around 50% of the population at 8pm.In contrast, radio listeners have about 8% and rose rapidly until 9am to reached a peak around 30%.
During 2am to 4am, radio and television audiences have the same percent viewers at around 2% and continually rose. Moreover, during 10am to 6am, radio listenersdeclined steadily but television viewers record a gradual rose around this period.