Ielts writting task 1.

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the US between 1920 and 2000.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the differences in changes in the birth rates of China and the US from 1920 to 2000.
Overall, the trend of the two countries fluctuated over the period and the birth proportion of USA was higher than China.
There was a variation between 1920 and 1935 in China. The following period, from 1935 to 1940, the birth rate in China dived to 5% after it reached 15% in 1935. In the 1950s, the birth rate increased rapidly to 20%, which is the highest point of the whole graph before there was a sudden fall to below 10%. Throughout the remainder of the period, the rate of birth in China dropped gradually to approximately 2% by 2000.
Over the same period, the birth of America fluctuated slightly. Between 1935 and 1945, there was a plummet and the bottom of this period reached under 5%. In the 1945-1950 period, it went up dramatically to 15 %. The rest of period, the figure of the birth in the USA went down continuously to over 5%.