IELTS writting task 1

The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph above indicates the proportion of the visitors coming to Art Gallery, Pavilion, Pier and Festival in Brighton, England in a period of 30 years from 1980 to 2010.

Overall, the percentage of the tourist varied between four attractions very much. Most of the changes from 1980 to 2010 fluctuated dramatically, especially was Pavillion.

It's easy to see that the percentage of Pavillion had many variations. For example, the people visit this destination increased gradually from 1980 to 1985 and peaked at 49% at the end of this period. Throughout the remainder of the period, the number of tourists of this place had decreased rapidly by the year 2000 and continue from that time to 2010. In the same way, the visitors coming to Art Gallery increased to 37% in 1985 but there was a stable decline between 1990 and 2010 and dropped to below 10%.

The trend of Festiva wasn’t like Pavillion and Art Gallery. Although it started higher than both of above destinations, there weren't any clear changes in all the time referred, it always stayed below 30%. The Pier is the only place had a positive outlook when the percentage of visitors increase from 1980 to 2010 and it isn't likely to stop this achievement.