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The table below illustrates the total number that people from different age groups in Someland spend their free time on six different activities per annum.

Overall, it is clear from the table that people tend to spend the greatest amount of their downtime watching TV/Videos. It is also clear that the older people get, the less involved they are in group exercise/sport and socializing with 4 or more people.

Teens and elderly people aged more than 70 years old in Someland devote a nearly equal amount of their downtime watching TV/Videos, at around 1200 hours, which is two times and three times as many as the figure of those who are the 30s and 50s. A reverse pattern can be seen for individual exercise and going to the cinema. To be more specific, people of all age groups reporting to spend fewer than 200 hours and 100 hours doing personal exercise alone and going to the movie theater distributively.

As regards socializing with a group of fewer than four people, 150 hours is the total of time that people younger than 30 years of age spend on annually, and this figure rises by 200 hours as the group expands in number. Group exercise/sport seems to less attractive to the residents living in Someland as they age. While people aged under the 40s dedicated spending more than 200 hours on group exercise/sport, old people above 60 reported not spending any time taking part in.