IELTS WRITING TEST 2 CAMBRIDGE 10

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Some people think all university students should study whatever they like. I strongly agree students should study whatever they like as there are many secure career options apart from science and technology. Students should get a chance to explore themselves and pursue whatever they wish to study. Many career options such as Architecture, Art, Designing, Law, Pilot, etc can be pursued and succeed in your future.

Students should only pursue in what their interest lasts in, as they would happily study and work in that field. For instance, if a child loves to paint art but due to lack of knowledge and parents pressure or universities not including these subjects makes child forcing chose between science and technology. This results in peer pressure and poor academic score of that child. However, if same child is allowed to showcase his/her talent in art then child would surely love it while doing and could succeed with great grades.

Moreover, parents expect students should perform well in examinations. This creates huge pressure on students. Some students might not handle pressure while studying forced subjects and might take wrong actions in peer pressure. Not just parents but students have competition amongst themselves. If not achieved well grades leads to low self esteem where as learning subjects which are of interest can cheer students and create happy and confident atmosphere around them.

Overall looking at the pros of students getting chance to select their subjects and pursue their dream career apart from science and technology is correct choice. Neither parents nor universities should force or pressurize students to select subjects instead motivate them to pursue their goal.

Cachi · Accepted Answer

In some countries, the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future?

People hold differing views about what the roots for the discrepancies in the role of men and women in todays world and how may parenting develops in the forthcoming years.

There are some explicit and compelling justifications why it is obviously a vast difference between the duties of a father and a mother. On the one hand, males are the breadwinners of the whole family by courtesy of the high efficiency and productivity that they can supposedly obtain from work. Needless to say, men are self-assured, more career-orientated, physically strong and also have longer endurance, good elasticity as opposed to women and can effectively work under external key factors regardless of factors like stress, fatigue, burnout,.. This can greatly foster the overall workforce, positively boosting their employability with promising remunerations so as to enhance the income of an extended family. Moreover, men can bottle up their feelings, seemingly hide their actual thoughts, which are undeniably of paramount importance when they have to not only to grapple with but also to fully adapt to demanding and even hazardous circumstances. On the other hand, women are the weaker *** who purportedly prefer to stay at home, spend much time supporting, nurturing and lending a helping hand to other family members and to be housewives. Compared to males, females are more reserved and self-conscious and are free and open to express their emotions widely, and are more sensitive to modifications in life. They also have more vulnerability in terms of both physical fitness and mental being. This apparently makes them more suitable for doing houseworks, taking essential cares of others, bringing up children, and concerning daily oft-done things. In other words, these genders are radically opposite.

Irrespective of the aforementioned idea, I would emphasize that the trend tends to alter in the upcoming period when women would pursue a career and men would stay at home, look after kids and cook daily meals. It appears that people will no longer always be under the impression that females are rigorous obligated to dedicate only for family, they are, conversely, going to be granted equal and egalitarian opportunities to follow the path of career that they opt for and adore to do. Uniquely, with the proliferation of cutting-edge technology, women will be suffered from any old-fashioned xenophobia prejudice and, on the other hand, would be empowered to various options to choose from. This by all means gives fathers a chance to get closer to and spend time with their children, which is something that they hardly ever do. Kids can also receive cares and love from both their parents rather than mainly from their moms in the previous years, hence developing a family gatherings and emotional bonds where both mums and dads share parenting as well as vocational duties. In my view, this development is allegedly natural and positive due to the fact that this will create a civilized utopia without discrimination, stereotype and objectification. On the whole, the pattern that the role of men and women will be replaced and conversed will be an unavoidable change in the near future.

In conclusion, although there are still tangible differences or distinction between 2 opposite sexes in present days, I potently endorse the point of view that there will be a contrast change in the responsibility of men and women.

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