IELTS Writing Task#1

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Please help to check the letter below. Thank you very much

You have recently started work in a company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter

1. Explain why you changed jobs
2. Describe your new job
3. Tell him/her about other news

Answer

Dear Mark,

I hope you're well. I'm just writing to tell you that I have recently started to work at new company called "SJC" in the steel industry.

As you knew that I have worked at Intel company for nine years. I left Intel company to move to a new place because SJC offers me a senior management position, and doubles my current salaries. On top of that, I can have other perks such as car allowances, healthcare coverage.

In a new position, I manage twenty engineers and a group of technologists who are the experts in molding techniques. Another interesting I'd like to let you know is that I have a lot of opportunities to travel to other branches of the company or visit foreign clients.

One of the big surprises to tell you is that I and Marry will get married next month, and we planned to celebrate this special event on March. You are more than welcome to come and join us. And John will be visiting us too, so there is another reason to come.

Please let me know if you decide to come.

Best wishes,

Trong