IELTS - WRITING TASK II
All children should learn to play a musical instrument at school. hoa far do you agree with this statement?
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Music is believed to be the food for the soul. I extremely agree that learning to play a musical instrument at school from an early age is useful for all chidren in many ways.
Firstly, playing an instrument helps children get comfortable with self expression. In order to be good at their instrument they need to practice and perform in front of a few audiences, for instance, their music teacher, parents, brother, sister, or firends. Therefore, they can increase their confidence while they are growing up.
Secondly, it makes them learn patience. Learning how to play an instrument is not easy task. It requires a lot of patience which is not a natural skill to most of us. Children have to presever through many hours, days, and possible years of practicing.
For these ways mentioned above, I strongly believe that learning to play a musical instrument for all children is really helpful.
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