[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consume goods

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The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in thepopularity of fashion clothes and consume goods. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the common in clothing styles and consumptiongoods are reflected from the imitation between people. Although assuming peopletend to have same taste in wearing, I find myself disagreement with thisopinion for the following reasons.

To begin with, the main reason why I believe people would havetheir independent choices in shopping is that consumers nowadays are surroundedby variety options thanks to the market expansion and the competition betweenmanufacturers, so they will be more difficult and picky on buying goods. Morespecifically, shoppers are so intelligent that they are likely to make apurchase which would be more suitable for their needs rather than following thetrend. For example, more and more people tend to choose products derived fromnature with a view to protecting their health in lieu of products withluxurious packaging.

Furthermore, I believe that due to the class division in societyand the different standard of living, the poor can not be able to duplicate therich and vice versa. Indeed, a wealthy person might prefer high-priced itemswhich would show off his status, while a person living in poverty wouldconsider products that fit his needs and budget.

That is not to say that people are not likely to keep pursuingaesthetic values and fashion is obviously an exception. Moreover, due to themushrooming development of the entertainment industry, advertisement and socialmedia are also factors that bring ordinary people closer to fashion icons,which would drive people desiring to be more trendy like them. For instance,the Kpop culture has drawn a whole bunch of youth towards specific clothingstyle. However, following the trend is quite extravagant in some cases, becausenot many people can afford to be willing to pay for an item that is sometimes redundant.

In conclusion, although the similarities of fashion has shown thehuman’s imitation but I would concur with those who believe that peopleindividually have their own consideration when make a purchase.

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