Ielts Writing Task 2 - Please Help Me Correct Mistakes

In modern society, ambition is getting more and more important. How important is ambition for people to be successful in life? Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?

Some people believe that ambitious personalities play an essential role to fulfill life goals. While there are several negative impacts, I believe this is a positive impact.

It’s true to say that, human’s life would such without having any aspiration, people will be end up losing their motivation and their goals in life. Engaging in any tasks, such people tend to be deterred from concentrating and putting them in mind of their jobs. Therefore, they seem to not to be able to finish their duties or being done late without efficiency. In contrast, if someone is ambitious, they will know what their passion is and who they want to become. They need to a lot of belief and efforts, even they have to give up their habits and preference to reach their goals. These can be easily seen in world athletes. They always come up with the aspiration to climb to the top of the world, thus it help them to encounter seemingly insurmountable difficulties.

However, there are several detrimental effects that over-aspiring people has on. They don't know how to identify themselves and their lives, their goals to be rather an unimaginable aspiration than a likelihood for the future, thus they have to endure the stressness by themselves in a long time, which can lead to metal-related problems. In addition to that, in order to reach their goals, some people will not hesitate giving up social moral/ethical standards. This life style is severely criticized today.

Ambition is the one of vital qualities which reinforce people to have successful life with the transparency. However, people need to manipulate this character carefully to not be controlled by it and ideal career and life path for themselves