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Many youngsters are nowadays opting for artistic professions than the conventional ones. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, young adults are moving more towards professions that require innovations and creativity rather than to handle the data and the tasks. While this provides them a chance to show talent and become more successful in life, this also causes lack of conventional professionals.

First and the foremost, artists more money than other jobs. Once they get enrolled jobs such as singing, dancing, acting or painting, slowly and gradually they become famous and successful. For instance, Angelina Jolie, after starting her career as an actress became very famous and now earns millions of dollars for just a single film. Hence artists earn more fame and success then accountants and engineers.

Secondly, innovative minds get opportunity to uncover their talents in front of the audience. This is not possible if youngsters choose professions other than arts. Popular singer, Atif Aslam, for example performs in different concerts and shows every other day. Therefore, such stage performances provide chances to the people to show their abilities.

However, young people selecting arts and crafts as a career has disadvantages as well. If more and more people choose arts and not science after schools, there will be a debt of other professionals such as doctors. This society needs more doctors than artists as a basic need. As a result, health of people is going to suffer. An example of this is that, a recent Oxford study showed that around 80% of youngsters chose arts as a field of interest and this caused 60% decrease in the number of health professionals. As a result, health of people is going to suffer and there would be an adverse effect on nation’s health.

In conclusion, although enrollment of young adults in arts has merits of being popular and exploring talents, the demerit of decline in number of doctors is weightier.