IELTS Writing Task 2: New parents should attend parenting classes to ensure the growth of their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Child-rearing is a arduous job, which is required essential skills and valuable knowledge of parents. While some newlywed couples are capable of having a counsel to take part in parenting courses in order to gain a wide range of well-prepare knowledge related to raising children, I believe that these are not enough to assure healthy developments of children.

On the one hand, parenting courses offer would-be parents with indispensable soft skills and precious knowledge for raising children. Raising a child involves a wide range of in-depth knowledge related to medical heaths as well as a child’s manners. Firstly, just married couples ought to attend in a parenting classes to be equipped with a number of emergency situations. During infancy, children are prone to risk of suffer from health-related issues; hence, parents find it necessary to gain a real-world experiment in order to overcome adversity. Nutrition also are beneficial for physical growth ensure. By attending a parenting classes, every parents could gain more advantageous information about what age should have a advisable nutrient content. Last, children’s manners are directly influence by their parents which are their role model. They imitate every action that have been did many times by their dad and mom. So as to sharpen the personality, parents should engage in parenting courses which could help them teach the baby distinguish from the correct behavior to the misdeeds. Parents could use appropriate punishment to develop strong sense of discipline so that children could be prevented from imitating the wrongs doings.

On the other hand, participating in parenting courses has some limitations. Each child has a different instinct so the way to teach them also needs to be different. Parents teach their children by-the-book instruction is a deficiency. So that, it would be much better to integrate a hands-on experience and the guidance from parenting classes.

To sum up, first-time parents join course in parenting skills have both pros and cons, they are not enough to guarantee healthy developments of children. New parents should integrate these courses with other alternatives including exchanging experience with other parents as well as spending more time to have a gain insight into their kids.