Ielts writing task 2 : Deforestation and solutions. ( writing feedback )

Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world , with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem ?

With the development of science and technology, manifold countries in all over the world are dealing with some serious problems which have mischievous effects to the environment caused by human activities. One of these problems deeply affected to human – being is deforestation. To tackle this predicament, I propose some solutions based on personal view points.

There are many different countries with their own separate natural, social conditions so that it is difficult to solve the problem with common resolutions properly. To diminish the extent of logging, government and its authorities plays a significant key. Environmental law and others policies such as punishment, encouragement,… are obligatory for every citizen in each country. By this way, authorities can control activities of human and punish them if they break the rules; lessen more forests removed.

However, heightening human awareness is the most fundamental way to deal with deforestation. This problem caused by clueless activities, ignorance of humans and their greed. Improving their knowledge about the importance of natural environment in general, the forest in particular and serious consequences of destroying forests can affect to their actions in the the future. Not only do the people save the environment but also save their lives

Last but not least, joining international cooperation forum about solving natural issues supports member countries experiences, infrastructures to tackle deforestation problem. International connection may increases the effectiveness of their own resolutions, stabilizes habitat of myriad terrestrial, aquatic plants, animals and humans in all over the world as well.

To conclude, forests are irreplaceable parts of natural environment as well as their benefits. Restricting the extent of deforestation by optimal solutions is one of the most important mission for every people on earth.