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International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the
country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The development of international tourism has brought many benefits for both tourist and host nation. Although there are many serious drawbacks which a result of this trend, I believe that advantages outweigh disadvantages.

On the one hand, there are some aspects of international travel – mainly commercial tourism needed to be considered. In terms of the visitor, they usually travel to abroad attractive destinations where the prices of everything are grossly inflated. They may be overcharged for everything from a taxi, a meal in a restaurant or buying a souvenir. In terms of host country, the problems of disposing populated water waste, construction accommodation buildings and placing no rule visit spots lead to deteriorating environment. For example, many resorts in Thailand and Malaysia have been cemented by hotels and luxury sky buildings for general tourists from Europe.

On the other hand, despite some obvious significant drawbacks, I argue that we could not deny or ignore the benefits of the growing international travel industry. Firstly, there are ever-greater competitions among the travel agencies which increase the value of travel pack, so travelers could maximize their experience in an oversea country and culture in there. Secondly, the influx of international visitors brings more profits for hotel developments and constructions. The staffs in this industry acquire more salary, as a result, improve living standards.

In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of international travel for both travelers and host countries are greater than the drawbacks, serious though these are.