IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (AGREE OR DISAGREE)

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TOPIC: Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that whether or not people succeed in pursuing their goals is by the support of unexpected fortune. From my point of view, the idea mentioned above is completely unfeasible and should be denied, the essay below would clarify my perspective.

On the one hand, there is no guarantee for success without effort and aptitude. Firstly, endeavour holds the vital position among individuals' accomplishment. Stephen Hawking, who had a hazardous disease but never gave up his scientific job, had taken a dominant role in modern physics and cosmology by unceasingly accumulate his knowledge in science. Besides, another remarkable factor is one's innate talent. Young children have their exceptional talent on the TV show or people whose skills are obtained and horned by educational system and real life experiences would perform better than others in attaining their aims.

On the other hand, luck is insignificantly attributable to people's goals. Initially, the most pronounced unimportant luck is short-term fortune. For instance, some people surprisingly have a huge amount of money from lottery, but the more money, the lazier they will become which result in the fact that people would waste their money. Additionally, another point to suggest that luck is trivial is the risky decision. For example, some individuals and enterprises have to deal with danger determination and spend a giant amount of money on these stock for a long time.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the attribute of luck in achievement is confusing since it is considered to be a contributor of success. Thus, everyone should raise awareness of trying the best by themselves.

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