Ielts writing task 2

The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

Nowadays, education is one of the most important factors in modern life. There are many studying sources for learners, like internet, school, family,… It is true that learn from family play more integral part than from school. I agree in part with this idea.

On the one hand, school’s education is really important so there are several reasons. On reason for that, many subjects, such as: chemistry, mathematics,… born since the world was developed; due to they are the foundation for students to reach their success, reduce stress, be healthily,… for instance music or physical education. Furthermore, soft skills, which are socializing, commucating or respecting skills, play a critical role in modern life. If students don’t know to have a respected socialization, always show their knowledge to other people, they can have many envies whom hate and jealous. Therefore, to assess one side, schooling has many things that family can’t offer.

On the other hand, family education is more fans than school in this stressed, fast pace and modern life. Initially, the parents or are more familiar with and understand their children, so they can share their notions, feelings with their family. For example, when they feel lonely, be bullied, not going a good relationship with their best friend,… they can talk about that with their family. According to research, sharing will make people feel better, more comfortable especially with teenager’s and age 20-25’s group, which are one of the most group of age tolerate stress, under pressure, be criticized. Likewise, students may grasp something that their parents teach faster than in school result in effective learning and not waste too much time.

In conclusion, it is certainly true that students receive knowledge from family may be an effective way, but it is by no means schooling isn’t important for students.