IELTS Writing task 2

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, due to the development of education, students so far can learn at school or online. It is a common belief that studying with directly communicating in a classroom is more effective than online. In my opinion, I partly agree with this point of view. This essay will discuss both sides and gives relevant examples to support.

On the one hand, there are two main reasons why people support offline classes. One supportive argument states that studying in class provides students a chance to interact with other mates directly. Regarding students, this benefit could help them develop comprehensively and prevent depression. Another positive of learning offline is concentration. To further explain, offline classes could control students easily and keep distractions far away. In addition, learning offline also keeps students in the right way and prevents them from poor information.

Apart from the practical merits expressed above, I believe that learning online has some noticeable advantages. Firstly, students can access massive information from the internet. For example, when they tackle an intricate question, they can immediately search for the solution on the internet. Secondly, learning online at home is a perfect time to learn how to manage their time and not depend on their teachers and friends. This is due to the fact that they could learn everywhere and every time, all required is a mobile phone or a laptop.

In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that studying with a group of students in a classroom or learning online at home has its own plus points.