IELTS Writing task 2

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Some people feel that the government should pay the costs of running universities so that a university education will be free for anyone who wants it.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Tuition is one of the burdens of studying at university for learners. As a result, some people believe that the government should implement a measure which they do not need to pay any fee for university education. In my view, this is necessary and this might have an extremely profound effect on education.

First of all, the rise of university school means that more people than ever before having access of education. Nowadays, students mostly select to study at university because they think that it is the way to get a job satisfaction. Moreover, the wages levels by education also higher than without education degrees. If government pays the costs of running universities, students will do not have to pay tuition fee. That means there will be more people to apply for universities. So, the student who used to not have financial capacity for education will able to join a university college.

On the other hand, when a government's country implement this payment in education, there would be more students from abroad come to study. These international students will give a large impact on the other field such as service industry and tourism industry. For example, in Germany, there free tuition in most schools and the international students who come there to study only need to pay for costing living.

In conclusion, despite some of the disadvantages, I still believe that government should let the university education be free for everyone.