IELTS WRITING TASK 2

This is my IELTS writing task 2. I really need a comment for it and I am so thankful, if you read and check my grammar mistakes and the content.

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Topic:
Some people believe that space travel is a waste of government money while others believe it is important for human development. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Space travelling has become more popular for centuries. While some people say that it has affected the government's financial, others think that it is necessary for human development. Both of these opinions have merit, so this essay will discuss these.

First of all, billions of dollars are spent every year by the leadership of the country. Exploring into space is taking a large sum of money because of spaceship's cost, healthcare and other things. For example, they have to give salary for architects who works for it. Another reason is that the medical expenses for astronauts isn't cheap. Besides, accidents and problems happened in the space will be definitely required large amounts of money. Instead of paying for those, they can spend money on other things like education. In addition, problems on Earth must be dealt with first. If government cut their economy on space, they could provide more facilities for poor people.

On the other hand, travelling to space may help to discover new cures for problems on our planet. Human development will increase a lot due to space exploration. For instance, explorer might probably find out another fossil fuel on another planet when they went to the space. Natural resources and mineral also be found. Most scientists believe that there will be another planet that humans can live on. This is an important role in human development.

In my opinion, there is a strong possibility that our living qualities and economy of the country are improved. However, it should not waste state finance. I therefore believe that the development of human could be changed, if we found new discoveries in the space and save spending.

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