IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Advanced medical treatments are generally expensive. People’s access to proper heath care should not depend upon their level of income. All people have the right to access the best medicine available

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

As I can see, the advanced medical treatments are generally expensive. Some people say that their’s access to proper heath care should not depend upon their level of income and all people have the right to be met the demand for the best medicine available. I definitely agree.

In my own opinion, I think absolutely almost people who want to have strong heath, perhaps there aren’t anyone want to have weak heath and bring though an illness. And in the world, in community like today, I can see that in the world or typically in my country, not everyone is rich and have good income, I think not only my country but also another countries or anywhere also have rich people, normal people and poor people. There are a lot of people that they have been poor since they were in womb and I think absolutely they didn’t want to be a poor people , anyone is also want to have good income or have a big house, a car but they can’t. Unless they have good effort and try to achieve their goal day by day. But, I really want to talk that in equal society, we haven’t had
racial discrimination or distinguish the skin color and even we haven’t distinguish men and women anymore. So I think that there isn’t have any reason in order to allow all people have the right to access the best medicine available, although they are rich or poor.

I may agree with the poor people can not be totally the same with the rich people in all fields. But, about heath area, I think it must be equal for everyone. In my opinion, when a scientist do or product a medicine in order to help all people, not just help for rich people to find money.

Because heath is play an important role in anybody, for example if a poor person have a great effort to have an opportunity like normal or rich people someday, he or she has studied or worked a lots but when he or she have an strong illness which must be cured by advanced medical treatments, and absolutely he or she don’t have a lots money to pay on that treatments they can be hopeless and I think it is waste for he’s or her’s effort and opportunity of the future.

In addition, in my own opinion, besides a lots fields like education, financial condition, habitat. Every one should be behaved and cared about their health equally. People’s access to proper heath care should not depend upon their level of income.