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Ngọc Anh Nguyễn Posted 8 years ago
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IELTS WRITING TASK 2

 (TODAY MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE USING MOBILE PHONES AND COMPUTERS .THUS,PEOPLE ARE LOSING THE ABILITY TO COMMUNICATE FACE TO FACE .TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE)

Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about using mobile phones and computers are losing the ability to communicate face to face.While i accept that this may suit many people,i believe that using mobile phones and computers are also useful
On the other hand,when people use modern equipment alot,they are losing the ability to communicate with people by many reasons.One reason is that we do not spend much time for talking or caring our family.For instance,when people focus into entertain themselves such as computers...so on.Thus,people do not have time for relatives.In addition,some people use their smart phones or computers connecting network all day or even the entire time they have.As a result ,they increasingly are more dependent on social network .Furthermore they would have a life virtual and forget the real life with their own relations .Finally,they could not stand talking with other people and lose able to communicate naturally.
On the other hand,mobile phones and computers could also help some relationships.Firstly,if people do not stay near with their relatives or friends ,they could use social network for connecting with everyone.For example,Lily studies abroad and she doesn not see her family or her friends everyday.However she could communicate face to face with everybody through screen on computers or smart phones.Secondly,the use of smart phones or computers are also reduce travel expenses and save time.This may lead to people do not go out but still could talk or communicate with out people.Finally, mobile phones or computers are also bring many things useful and beneficial.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that using modern equipment are losing the ability to communicate,but this is by no means it makes lose the able to communicate face to face.
  

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1. Fix your spacing errors. They occur throughout your essay. 
Nowadays,an increasing number of people are concerned about using mobile phones and computers are losing the ability to communicate face to face.While i accept that this may suit many peopl

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