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Essay & Composition Writing

IELTS Writing Task 1 (Young Adults & Older People)

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?


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Today, overcrowding is a problem in many nations. There is no denying that all age groups are crucial to the development of the country. Some people argued that the growing number of young people is more productive than the aging population. This essay will examine both points of view and present both the negative and positive aspects.


The first benefit is that young people are full of fresh ideas and enthusiasm and are ready to work anywhere and in any weather. This kind of circumstance might accelerate development at a reasonable rate. Young people will develop a new approach to a simple way to fulfill the task of the job effectively, nonetheless, based on the new concepts. This may be the main aspect of the nation's progress. Besides, the government can reduce expenditures that are under the health care and medications category, while they can use public money for various projects like to develop infrastructures and other public services.


On the other hand, young folks lack experience compared to older ones, therefore an experienced labor force would be another important aspect in a country's development. Furthermore, a person with the most victories in their particular industries might not be creative. As an example, if this occurs in a production factory, its output would not increase due to a lack of creativity or new thoughts.


In conclusion, there are no age restrictions on humans, and each and every one of them has made an important contribution to the growth and economics of their nation.

  

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Today, overcrowding is a problem in many nations. (The task mentions nothing about too many people living together. Overcrowding is off-topic.) There is no denying that all age groups are crucial to the development of the country. Some people argued (use present tense) that the growing

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book hat 81In conclusion, there are no age restrictions on humans, and each and every one of them has made an important contribution to the growth and economics of their nation.

That is not the essay topic.

You have to answer the prompt in the task instructions.

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