IELTS WRITING TASK 1. Thanks for helping me.

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The pie chart indicates the proportion of capture in two genders in the past five years. While the bar chart illustrates the reasons for the arrested person in 2008

In general, the arrested percentage was more double than free percentage in both two sex. Furthermore, the man was arrested more than woman in 2008.

Initially, the past five years, the percentage of arrested males made up more twice than free males. Similarly, it was witnessed that the percentage of arrested females was near tenfold higher than not arrested. In addition, the percentage of arrested females was higher than males.

As for the bar chart, public drinking was the most reason for arrested cases in both two genders with over 35 percents for females and over 30 percents for males. Moreover, While the man was caught by some reasons such as theft, breach of order, drink-driving and other reasons. Reasons for females were no answers, assault, and public drinking.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

This is not a good exercise for Task 1.

The instructions are not native English. For the pie chart, it is unclear that being suspected of a crime, these people were stopped by the police, and either let go, or arrested. That is my assumption.

The numbers in the bar graph do not add up to 100% for each gender and they should.

If I were you, I would pick a different topic. This is a defective exercise.

The pie chart indicates the proportion of capture in two genders (wrong English) in the past five years. While the bar chart illustrates the reasons for the arrested person in 2008 (Incomplete sentence, fragment, missing punctuation, incorrect English.)

The pie chart shows the proportion of men and women who were arrested after being suspected of a criminal act over the past five years. The bar graph shows the distribution of reasons for the most recent arrest by gender in the year 2008. There are five specific categories: Theft, Assault, Drunk driving, Public intoxication and Disorderly Conduct. In addition, there are two other categories: Other crime and No answer.

In general, the arrested percentage was more double than free percentage in both two ***. Furthermore, the man was arrested more than woman in 2008. (Wrong form)

After being stopped, more than two-thirds of the men, and nine-tenths of the women were taken into custody.

Initially, the past five years, the percentage of arrested males made up more twice than free males. (Free males means they are not slaves.) Similarly, it was witnessed that t (Do not write these kinds of clauses in Task 1. Just describe the data. ) The percentage of arrested females was near tenfold higher than those not arrested. In addition, the percentage of arrested females was higher than for males.

As for the bar chart, public drinking was the most (missing word) reason for arrested cases in both two genders with over 35 percents (wrong form) for females and over 30 percents for males. Moreover, While the man was caught by ~~some~~ reasons such as theft, breach of order, drink-driving and other reasons. Reasons for females were no answers, (no answer is not a reason. It means that we don't know the reason.) assault, and public drinking.

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