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The table compares four different car companies, namely Renault, Rover, Vauxhall, and Cetirizine, in terms of the expenditures on five advertising types including press, cinema, outdoor, radio and television in 2002.

Overall, all four car companies spent highest money on TV advertising, while that of cinema was lowest. Also, total spending of Renault for advertising was higher than the other companies.

The advertising spending on radio of four car companies was equal, with 15 million dollars. Those of cinema were much smaller, with only 6 million and 5 million of Renault and Vauxhall respectively; especially Rover and Cetirizine had no expenditures for this type. In term of outdoor advertising, Renault and Vauxhall had equal expenditure, with 7 million, followed by Rover and Cetirizine, with only 2 million and 3 million respectively.

With regard to TV advertising, Cetirizine spent highest amount of money with 70 million, compared to those of Renault, Rover and Vauxhall with 59 million, 45 million and 65 million respectively. Finally, the expenditures for advertising on press of four companies were very unequal, with 45 million of Renault and only 8 million of Vauxhall.