IELTS Writing Task 1 Table and Pie Chart

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The figures below compare the number of internet users in several European nations as well as the prevalence of online shopping in these countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.The table describes the quantity of European netizen in 1995, 2000 and 2004 while the pie chart reckon the online shipping sales of Germany, France and Switzerland in 2004.Clearly, all the European countries experienced a common rise in the amount of people indulging in the net. However, each country followed a different path of growth. Internet had been popular in Britain since 1995 with a numerous of 16 millions users. And in 2004, it still outnumbered  any others with a total of 41 millions people. The UK only lost its lead one time during the year 2000, when Germany suddenly witnessed a dramatic increase from 5 millions Internet users to an impressive amount of 314 millions over 5 years, then dropped to a moderate number of 15 millions. For other countries, Switzerland increased the amount of user twice respectively over the period. Spain was the most less interested in the net and only reach a total of 2 millions in 2004, which is fourfold the people in 1995. France shared a similar growth like Switzerland and contributed nearly half of the total sum in online shopping. The Switzerland went second in rank and the Germany was the last which accounted for one-fifth of the whole chart.Overall, there was no real evidence of the connection between the Internet popularity and the online shopping tendency. As France netizen was smaller compared to Germany's, but they spent far more than that of the German.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

The table ~~describes~~ lists the number ~~quantity~~ of Internet users in five countries, Switzerland, Germany, France, Spain and the UK ~~European netizen~~(informal.) in three specific years: 1995, 2000 and 2004. ~~while~~The pie chart ~~reckon the~~ gives the proportion of total online shipping sales for these countries ~~in Germany, France and Switzerland~~ in 2004.

The figures you are using for this task are wrong. There were never 315 million people in the entire population of Germany. Last year the total population was 83 million. And it is inconceivable that there was no online shopping being done in the UK! Do not attempt to write essays using figures with such obviously flawed data. I found the correct figures by googling various IELTS sites.

Write about the figures below instead. I have highlighted incorrect word usage in your text.

Clearly, all the European countries experienced a common rise in the amount of people who were using the internet. ~~indulging in the net~~. However, each country followed a different path of growth. Internet had been popular in Britain since 1995 with ~~a numerous of~~ 16 millions users. And in 2004, it still outnumbered any others with a total of 41 millions people. The UK only lost its lead one time during the year 2000, when Germany suddenly witnessed a dramatic increase from 5 millions Internet users to an impressive (Do not use opinion words in Task1. "Impressive" is an opinion.) amount of 314 millions over (The value here in the table is completely erroneous. ) 5 years, then dropped to a moderate number of 15 millions. For other countries, Switzerland increased the amount of user twice respectively over the period. Spain was the most less interested in the net (This is an opinion or conclusion. Do not write this kind of text in Task 1.) and only reach a total of 2 millions in 2004, which is four times the number ~~fourfold the people~~ in 1995. France shared a similar growth like Switzerland and contributed nearly half of the total sum in online shopping. The Switzerland went second in rank and the Germany was the last which accounted for one-fifth of the whole chart.

Overall, there was no real evidence of the connection between the Internet popularity (You do not know about popularity. The data says nothing about popularity measurements. It is only the total number of users.) and the online shopping tendency. As France netizen was smaller (Are French people shorter than Germans?) compared to Germany's, but they spent far more than that of the German.

Anonymous · Answer

Given are two figures providing the comparison of internet user in five countries of Europe continent namely Switzerland, Germany, France, Spain, and UK in millions during ten years since 1995 as well as the communal internet shopping in these countries in 2004.Overall it can be seen that there are increasing number of internet user in all of countries that Britain become the highest region of internet access, while shopping trend in German had no related by the amount of the uses of internet fiture.Turning to the result of data from 1995 to 2004, UK had the highest of internet user at 16, 22 , and 41 respectively but had no contributed on the trend of internet shopping. Thus, it stark contrast with France and dominating a half of sales trend in the last period even mere 6 million people that get an access of internet. Furthermore, likewise Germany, Switzerland witnessed the steply increased fourfold since the former, while Spain become the slowest and lowest country not only at the number of internet user at two million but also in shopping sales on these European countries.

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